Posts Tagged With: dialogue

Inner Dialogue and Book Promotion

Hmm, she thought. How am I going to promote my book?

In addition to my constant perplexity about promoting my book, I came upon a writing issue that is not resolved! In writing my short story Horarium for Wattpad, I wanted to write someone’s inner dialogue and realized I wasn’t sure how to do that. Neither is the writing world, it seems. You can choose to put quotes in or you can write in italics. But nobody has convinced me that either way is the right way.

Here is a link about it: http://theeditorsblog.net/2012/02/28/inner-dialogue-writing-character-thoughts/

I chose for myself. What do you think?

Also, I found a great link about book promotion from an author who feels pretty much the same way I do about book promotion. http://dreamnotion.zhollis.com/2011/10/25/how-to-find-readers-for-your-novel-actual-steps-honest-answer She has a timeline of her book there that I really appreciate seeing. She also found the best promotion was the free material she offered!

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“I’m Confused,” She Said.

Because I’m confused. I am getting mixed messages about a tiny but important word: said. I even felt a little panicked about it at first.

I was taught in school to avoid too much “said”. But then again it was public school in Washington State, so the relevance to current thought is questionable.

Should we writers use “he/she/they said” after dialogue exclusively or should we find more interesting words. Who is right? What do you think?

These people think you need more interesting words:

These people think that anything other than “said” or maybe “asked” detracts from the story, calling them “said bookisms,”

“James Blish told me I had the worst case of “said bookism” (that is, using every word except said to indicate dialogue). He told me to limit the verbs to said, replied,asked, and answered and only when absolutely necessary.”

– Anne McCaffrey http://www.logicalcreativity.com/jon/quotes.html

These bloggers put it in a more comforting format, saying to limit them to 2 or 3 per page, and to use them sparingly when “said” is just not enough:

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